Explore how Shakespeare presents the power of persuasion in this extract. Refer closely to the extract in your answer. [20 marks] AO2
AO2 (published assessment objective): Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure to achieve effects and influence readers, using relevant subject terminology to support their views (English). For Geography: demonstrate geographical understanding of concepts and how they are used in relation to places, environments and processes, and the interrelationships between places, environments and processes. For History: explain and analyse historical events and periods studied using second-order historical concepts.
Assessed against AO2 using Revision Robin's own level descriptors below. These are not the exam board's mark scheme. Every quotation in the feedback is checked against your answer and the extract before you see it, and a teacher's mark overrides ours.
| Level 5 · 17 to 20 | Convincing, critical and exploratory response to the task and the whole text. Judicious, precise references integrated into the argument; analysis of the writer's methods with subject terminology used to sharpen the point; ideas about context or the writer's purpose are woven into the argument rather than bolted on. |
| Level 4 · 13 to 16 | Thoughtful, developed response. Apt references used to support a considered argument; examination of the writer's methods and their effects; ideas about context are relevant and linked to the task. |
| Level 3 · 9 to 12 | Clear, explained response. Relevant references; clear explanation of some methods and effects; some relevant comment on context. |
| Level 2 · 5 to 8 | Some explained comment. A supported point or two; some reference to the text; methods identified with simple comment on effect; context mentioned in passing or not at all. |
| Level 1 · 1 to 4 | Simple, supported comment. Narrates or describes the text; little reference to methods or context. |