In this extract, Pip is threatened by an escaped convict with 'a great iron on his leg'. Explain the importance of crime and punishment elsewhere in the novel. In your answer you must consider: • where crime and punishment are shown • how crime and punishment affect the characters. You should refer to the context of the novel in your answer. (20 marks) AO1, AO3
AO1 (published assessment objective): Identify and interpret explicit and implicit information and ideas; select and synthesise evidence from different texts (English Language). For Literature: read, understand and respond to texts, maintaining a critical style, developing an informed personal response, and using textual references including quotations to support and illustrate interpretations. For Geography: demonstrate knowledge of locations, places, processes, environments and different scales. For History: demonstrate knowledge and understanding of the key features and characteristics of the periods studied.
AO3 (published assessment objective): Compare writers' ideas and perspectives, as well as how these are conveyed, across two or more texts (English Language). For Literature: show understanding of the relationships between texts and the contexts in which they were written. For Geography: apply knowledge and understanding to interpret, analyse and evaluate geographical information and issues to make judgements. For History: analyse, evaluate and use sources (contemporary to the period) to make substantiated judgements.
Assessed against AO1, AO3 using Revision Robin's own level descriptors below. These are not the exam board's mark scheme. Every quotation in the feedback is checked against your answer before you see it, and a teacher's mark overrides ours.
| Level 5 · 17 to 20 | Convincing, critical and exploratory response to the task and the whole text. Judicious, precise references integrated into the argument; analysis of the writer's methods with subject terminology used to sharpen the point; ideas about context or the writer's purpose are woven into the argument rather than bolted on. |
| Level 4 · 13 to 16 | Thoughtful, developed response. Apt references used to support a considered argument; examination of the writer's methods and their effects; ideas about context are relevant and linked to the task. |
| Level 3 · 9 to 12 | Clear, explained response. Relevant references; clear explanation of some methods and effects; some relevant comment on context. |
| Level 2 · 5 to 8 | Some explained comment. A supported point or two; some reference to the text; methods identified with simple comment on effect; context mentioned in passing or not at all. |
| Level 1 · 1 to 4 | Simple, supported comment. Narrates or describes the text; little reference to methods or context. |