In this extract, there is an attempt to create a sense of mystery and unease as Harker arrives at the castle. Evaluate how successfully this is achieved. Support your views with detailed reference to the text.
AO4 (published assessment objective): Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references (English Language). For Literature: use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation.
Assessed against AO4 using Revision Robin's own level descriptors below. These are not the exam board's mark scheme. Every quotation in the feedback is checked against your answer and the extract before you see it, and a teacher's mark overrides ours.
| Level 4 · 12 to 15 | Perceptive, critical evaluation. Takes a clear, developed view on the statement; shows how the writer's methods create the effects claimed; a convincing range of precise textual references; weighs the statement rather than simply agreeing. |
| Level 3 · 9 to 11 | Clear, relevant evaluation. Takes a clear view and supports it with relevant references; explains how methods produce effects; mostly convincing. |
| Level 2 · 5 to 8 | Some attempt at evaluation. Expresses an opinion with some supporting reference; comments on method are general or thin. |
| Level 1 · 1 to 4 | Simple, limited evaluation. Agrees or disagrees with little support; mostly retells the extract. |