Compare how the writers of Text 1 (Mary Kingsley) and Text 2 (Isabella Bird) present their experiences of travelling in an unfamiliar land. Support your answer with detailed reference to the texts. [14 marks]
AO3 (published assessment objective): Compare writers' ideas and perspectives, as well as how these are conveyed, across two or more texts (English Language). For Literature: show understanding of the relationships between texts and the contexts in which they were written. For Geography: apply knowledge and understanding to interpret, analyse and evaluate geographical information and issues to make judgements. For History: analyse, evaluate and use sources (contemporary to the period) to make substantiated judgements.
Assessed against AO3 using Revision Robin's own level descriptors below. These are not the exam board's mark scheme. Every quotation in the feedback is checked against your answer and the extract before you see it, and a teacher's mark overrides ours.
| Level 4 · 11 to 14 | Perceptive, detailed comparison. Analyses how each writer's methods convey their perspective; judicious, well-selected references from both texts; the comparison is sustained and structured around ideas, not just similarities and differences listed. |
| Level 3 · 8 to 10 | Clear, relevant comparison. Explains how each writer conveys their perspective with relevant references from both texts; comparison is clear and organised. |
| Level 2 · 5 to 7 | Some comparison. Identifies differences or similarities in viewpoint with some reference to both texts; comment on method is general. |
| Level 1 · 1 to 4 | Simple, limited comparison. Describes one or both texts with little real comparison; little reference to how perspectives are conveyed. |