For this question focus on the second half of the source, from 'A breakfast-room adjoined the drawing-room...' to the end. In this part of the source, Jane finds a perfect escape from her unhappy life. The writer makes it clear that she is still trapped and alone. To what extent do you agree and/or disagree with this statement? In your response, you could: - consider your impressions of Jane and her hiding place - comment on the methods the writer uses to present Jane and her hiding place - support your response with references to the text. [20 marks]
AO4 (published assessment objective): Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references (English Language). For Literature: use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation.
Assessed against AO4 using Revision Robin's own level descriptors below. These are not the exam board's mark scheme. Every quotation in the feedback is checked against your answer and the extract before you see it, and a teacher's mark overrides ours.
| Level 4 · 16 to 20 | Perceptive, critical evaluation. Takes a clear, developed view on the statement; shows how the writer's methods create the effects claimed; a convincing range of precise textual references; weighs the statement rather than simply agreeing. |
| Level 3 · 11 to 15 | Clear, relevant evaluation. Takes a clear view and supports it with relevant references; explains how methods produce effects; mostly convincing. |
| Level 2 · 6 to 10 | Some attempt at evaluation. Expresses an opinion with some supporting reference; comments on method are general or thin. |
| Level 1 · 1 to 5 | Simple, limited evaluation. Agrees or disagrees with little support; mostly retells the extract. |